According to those two articles, I strongly believe that the variety of the engineering profession is the most important thing in these days and future, too. It has come through several variation throughout the centuries.
In the world today, sustainability technology is the norm so that it can provide a better life for human being. To keep pace with the technology, the engineering profession has to be diverse into various type of specialisation. For an example, mechanical engineering has roughly diverse into mechatronic, aerospace and oil and gas engineering. To meet human need, engineering today is not only involving the matter of manufacture and building but it is also emcompassing the service sector, banking, finance, medicine, computing as well. Undoubtedly, the scope of engineering has been broadened and its variety will be continued in future.
Due to the globalisation challenges , engineering has become highly recommended today due to its vastness of job opportunity. Resources, energy, water, poverty, health problem, high-tech information and environmental disaster will not longer be small issues but they are the prime challenges for all the engineers in the world. Exactly, engineers need to solve their tasks by foresighting the future with creativity.
Nowadays, the engineers can communicate with other engineers worldwide in all forms and share their knowledge conveniently. The engineers will cooperate with others profession to make use of the knowledge. For instances, architecture will need engineers to construct a building to prevent collapse while drug researcher will require engineers to invent a new drug by applying chemistry as well. As a result, the world is more connected to face those challenges together and this give rise to the expansion of engineers' world as well.
In conclusion, the contribution of engineering will not be ignored and it will continue expand into several kinds of specialisation in the future. Due to its flexibility, engineers will be recruited by those large companies in a large demand in the future. So, I agree that the expansion of this profession will really bring benefits to human, to the rich and poor.
3 comments:
Hi Sam:
I agree that nowadays engineers make contributions to every area of human’s life. As all kinds of problems occur in our world, engineers are recommended to solve them.
Just as you have said, all the areas are connected with each other. Engineers cannot solve some problems with one kind of knowledge. Hence, it is important for engineers from different areas to share their knowledge and make cooperation.
Here are the mistakes I can find out:
“seveal” – “several” ( P1 3rd line) (It is still correct, but I think it is not formal)
“knowledges” – “knowledge” (the plural case should not add “s”)
“be cooperate with” – “cooperate with” (P3 3rd line)
Probably my edit is not correct somehow. Hope this can help you.
Samuel (Ma Pengfei)
Hi Sam:
Thank you for making comments for me.
There are my comment:
P2:
To meet(satisfy) human need, engineering today is not……;
its variety(diversity) will be continued in future.
P3:
Due to(Because of) the globalisation challenges.
I think the idea of your essay is clear, and you can develop your idea step by step.
Hey, Yii Sam, thx for pointing out the errors in my essay...
You may want to include quotes from the references as they are good supporting details for your essay. Another point to note is that 'focus' cannot be used as adj. You may want to substitute "focus challenges" with "prime challenges".
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